I wish my roses were still alive to this day, but the discoveries continue to educate me. I see that the negative feedback of my rose bush dying has started to affect the plants around it.
9 Nov. 2014
"Everything is dry and starting to die.
Dull, colorless, and gloomy is all I see.
I hate Fall. Fall is when all the green starts turning into brown; colors that look faded and ugly. The only green left in my garden is the bit of grass that covers less than a fourth of my garden." - My Field Notes
I witness the changes in Nature every year but I have never observed the changes until now. I don't really like it and it makes me sad having to see my roses dead everyday because I planted the rose bush and I raised the bush. I watered it and watched my roses grow. I saw my rose bush as a child. I did everything that a Mother does to raise a Baby(except the diaper thing ew).
My Mom said, "Mi hija no te aguites, todo se muere. Yo se que quidastes tus rosas bien pero todo se muere. Es la naturaleza. En vez de estar aguitada, escribe lo que sientes. Eso es lo que ice yo cuando se fue tu Papa.."
In English, she said, " Daughter don't be sad, everything dies. I know that you took care of your roses well but everything dies. It's a part of nature. Instead of being sad you should write about your feelings. That's what I did when your Dad left.."
I took my Mom's advice and I wrote about my roses.
I witness the changes in Nature every year but I have never observed the changes until now. I don't really like it and it makes me sad having to see my roses dead everyday because I planted the rose bush and I raised the bush. I watered it and watched my roses grow. I saw my rose bush as a child. I did everything that a Mother does to raise a Baby(except the diaper thing ew).
My Mom said, "Mi hija no te aguites, todo se muere. Yo se que quidastes tus rosas bien pero todo se muere. Es la naturaleza. En vez de estar aguitada, escribe lo que sientes. Eso es lo que ice yo cuando se fue tu Papa.."
In English, she said, " Daughter don't be sad, everything dies. I know that you took care of your roses well but everything dies. It's a part of nature. Instead of being sad you should write about your feelings. That's what I did when your Dad left.."
I took my Mom's advice and I wrote about my roses.
Mis Cuatro Rosas
Mis bellas cuatro rosas.
Rositas y Delicadas;
Un symbolo de Poder;
Rositas y Delicadas;
Un symbolo de Poder;
Ellas se reproducieron;
Floriaron;
Y se murieron.
Nada quedo de su hermoso color;
Solo el recuerdo de sus bellas petalos.
-Itzayana Silva
My Four Roses
My beautiful four roses.
Pink and Delicate;
A symbol of Power;
Pink and Delicate;
A symbol of Power;
They reproduced;
Bloomed;
And died.
Nothing remained of their gorgeous color;
But the memory of their beautiful petals.
-Itzayana Silva
I love that you included your mom's voice. I also love (and envy) that you can write in two languages. Great blog.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you translated the spanish into english. I love the poem and how you compared your rose bush to a baby. Great job.
ReplyDeleteI think it's briliant how you included spainish into your blog and made it sound really beautiful. Your poem was really great as as well.
ReplyDeleteI feel like even though your roses are dead you can still cherish the beauty of them when they were alive. Even for a loved one you cherish the memories you made with them and when they are gone it makes you realize the beauty that person truly had. Great blog!
ReplyDeleteI love how you included Spanish in your blog, I wish I could do that. I love how you compared your rose bush to a baby, and included humor (the diapers.) The poem you wrote is beautiful. I wish I could read it in Spanish, you can tell you've really bonded with your roses.
ReplyDeleteThis blog is very good! I really love how you include insights about your personal life. Although you mentioned a little portion about your personal life with your mom writing down her feelings after your dad left it really got me thinking. Those eight words "That's what I did when your Dad left," really got to me in ways that I can't even begin to describe.
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